Chapter 1
Bridgeport, 2003
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“Your honor, the defendant has made outrageous claims against my client—claims that have brought disrepute unfairly to an upright and noble citizen of Bridgeport.”
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“The judgment is for the plaintiff, Pete Logan, in the amount of $9000 to be paid immediately. This court is adjourned.”
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“How did it go?” Carter asks.
“I won, but not without a fight,” Pete replies. “I don’t know how much I want to keep living here in Bridgeport,” Pete continues.
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“And now that our adoption is finally going to happen, perhaps it’s time to consider a new home to raise our daughter.”
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“Well, since Grandpa Joseph passed away, his home in Twinbrook has been vacant,” Carter replies. “What do you think about going back home? It would be a nice change of pace and scenery.”
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So Pete and Carter Logan pack up the house, leave their celebrity lives in Bridgeport, and make the long journey to a new life in Twinbrook.
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“Who is that?” Pete asks as they approach a mysterious woman at the gate.
“I have no idea. Did the paparazzi follow us to Twinbrook?” Carter replies. “I wouldn’t put it past them.”
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“Lovely. I’ll just place our gift on the desk over here. I’m ready to crawl into bed. We’ve got busy days ahead of us.”
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“Do you think our ‘lonely and noble spirit’ might be willing to chip in on all of the housework that awaits us?”
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The next morning, Pete and Carter awaken to good news. “We have a message from the adoption agency. Betsy, our new daughter, will finally be here on Friday!”
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The days that follow are filled with upgrading all of the appliances and preparing the home for Betsy. |
Chapter 2
Pete and Carter relish every moment with their daughter over the next few years as she grows and develops into a beautiful, creative, and smart young girl. |
Betsy excels in school and spends her free time painting, writing, and hanging out with friends. |
She also loves to stargaze and dreams of becoming an astronaut. |
One morning, Betsy wakes up to find a monarch butterfly on display in her bedroom. She is ecstatic. |
“Thank you for the butterfly! I love it!” Betsy tells her dads at breakfast. |
“Did you get Betsy a butterfly?” Carter asks Pete after Betsy leaves the table.
“I didn’t do it. I assumed you were behind it all.”
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“This is very strange. I really hope we aren’t dealing with an intruder here,” Pete says.
“Or more mischievous paparazzi,” Carter adds.
“I’ll call the police to check out our security system.”
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“I don’t have much to go on here. I’m sorry I couldn’t be of more help to you and your family. Call me if you find anything else suspicious.” |
“It’s probably nothing,” Pete says to himself. “She must think we’re crazy.” |
“Daddy, did you eat all of the cookies?” Betsy asks the next morning.
“It wasn’t me,” Carter replies. “I think someone else might have a sweet tooth,” he adds turning his smile to Pete.
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“I didn’t eat the cookies. Do you want me to call the police again to investigate?” |
Betsy goes to sleep that night just as she is about to receive a special visitor. |
Chapter 3
As she is about to yell for her fathers, the ghost stops her, “Don’t fear, Betsy. I'm not here to hurt or scare you. I actually care about you greatly. I’m the one who brought you the butterfly." |
“My name is Jackson, and I lost my life and my family many years ago when I was trapped in a mineshaft.”
“But why are you here?” Betsy asks before hearing a knock at the door.
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“Is everything ok in there, Betsy? Who are you talking to?” |
“I’m ok, daddy. I’m a big girl. I’m not afraid.” |
Pete and Carter decide to sleep downstairs anyway. |
The next day, Betsy goes to the library after school to try to learn more about her mysterious visitor. She types “Jackson” and “mineshaft” with no results. |
She then types “Jackson” and “missing,” and learns of an unsolved mystery within her own family many years ago. |
Jackson Logan, Carter’s great-grandfather, lived with his wife Jessica and twin boys, Jacob and Joseph. |
One day, Jacob and Joseph ventured into the wilderness to find a new fishing spot. But they were lost and unable to find a way home. |
Jackson came home that night to find Jessica distressed. “They were supposed to be home hours ago,” she told her husband. |
“Don’t worry, my dear. I will find them. I’m sure they just went fishing and lost track of time,” Jackson said. He then went on an expedition in search of his missing boys. |
The boys were eventually found by a town search party. Jackson, however, never returned. |
“How sad,” Betsy murmurs to herself. “I wonder what I will find if I type ‘mineshaft’ and ‘Twinbrook’?” |
The search leads Betsy to the rare document room of the library. There she finds a map of an abandoned mineshaft, sealed for ages, and right beneath her own home! |
Chapter 4
Betsy invites her great-great-uncle Jacob over for a visit. “Tell me about my great-great grandfather, uncle Jacob.” |
“There he is right there. And there,” Jacob says pointing to the old photographs on the wall. |
“He was a great, great man. He loved us so much. And I will never forgive myself for his loss. Joseph never did either.” |
“Joseph and I were responsible.” Jacob’s eyes well with tears. “If we hadn’t gotten lost, he would have never gone missing.” |
“He’s here, uncle Jacob! I’ve met him. And I’m sure he’d love to speak with you. If there’s a way that can happen, I’m going to try to find it. I promise.” |
Jackson visits Betsy more and more in the coming days. They become good friends. “I found the mineshaft,” Betsy tells him over a game of chess. “It’s right underneath this house.” |
“You’re a brilliant girl, Betsy,” Jackson replies. “Your fathers must be so very proud. I certainly am.” |
“This has to stop, Carter,” Pete tells his partner.
“I know. She is a determined and very smart girl. We should be proud of that,” Carter replies. “I’ll see what I can do.”
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Betsy falls asleep smiling and hoping that Jackson will soon be free. |
Chapter 5
“You ready to get started?” Carter asks Pete. |
“I’m going to clear away this rubble, and hopefully we’ll find a way in,” Carter shouts over the din of his pickaxe. |
“There must be a way in somehow,” Pete says. "I'll look around." |
“Here! I found a hidden switch in the corner.” |
“You stay behind while I explore this place,” Carter tells Pete. “If I don’t come back in two hours, call for help.” |
“This place is one big puzzle,” Carter says as he finds another switch to reveal a hidden staircase. |
Carter ponders every room carefully finding hidden switches, torch levers, keystones, and abundant treasure. |
“More fireflies. I must be getting close to the end here.” |
“I wonder what lies behind this pile of rocks.” |
“You must be Jackson,” Carter says as he meets eyes with the ghost in front of him. For some reason, he isn’t scared at all. |
“Why did I have to crawl through this abandoned mineshaft to finally see you?” Carter asks. |
Jackson momentarily loses himself in the memories and begins to explain. |
“'No!’ I called out to death. ‘Don’t take them! Take me instead. Please don’t take my boys.’” |
“Death paused and looked into my eyes. ‘Very well. I will spare your boys’ lives and have your life instead.’” |
“It had to be done. It was the only way my boys would ever grow up to have their own families.” |
“As long as the entrance was sealed, I was unable to communicate with you. Betsy was my salvation. And you lifted the curse at last!” |
“I’m so proud of you, Carter.” |
Finally free from the curse, Jackson is welcomed into his new family. |
“Dad?” Jacob nears his father with hands trembling and heart pounding. “I’m so sorry I brought you harm. I’m so, so sorry.” |
“There is nothing to apologize for,” Jackson replies. “I just want to hold you close once again. I don’t ever want to let go.” |
The moon rises over a happy Logan household that night. |
And Betsy and Jackson sit outside watching the fireflies. |
What a wonderful story! So touching. My eyes welled up when Death appeared and the father begged him to take his life instead of his boys'. And, I especially love how an adopted child is the heroine. (BTW, I found your story because I saw sharonxyz's post.)
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